GRE 考试|GRE作文点评：看门见山直陈看法b

In sum, aside from certain academic areas in which outside work is either unavailable or unnecessary, students and faculty1 alike stand everything to gain when faculty enrich their careers by interspersing2 field work with academic work.

小结：作者总的来讲是大多数赞同原文看法的。但我感觉他在第一段的异议方面有所欠缺。没深入发挥下去。剩下的论证都是只能算说理明确，谈不上上上乘，但也很好啦。主要看来还是举例救了他啊。